Rate and Fix this yugioh hand control deck please?

Monsters (20)


3 Cyber Dragon


1 Breaker the Magical Warrior


3 Hydrogenddon


2 Aquarian Alessa


3 Mother Grizzly


2 Fenrir


2 Legendary Jujitsu Master


1 Neo-Spacian Grand Mole


3 Crystal Seer





Magic (10)


3 Shrink


1 Mystical Space Typhoon


1 Heavy Storm


2 Nobleman of Crossout


2 Pot of Avarice


1 Lightning Vortex





Traps (10)


1 Mirror Force


1 Torrential Tribute


3 Ojama Trio


1 Trap Dustshoot


2 Spiritual Water Art 鈥?Aoi


1 Mind Crush


1 Wind Storm of Etaqua





The idea is use ojama trio to produce easy kills for fenrir, alessa and hydrogeddon. use Wind storm of etaqua either on a big monster or the tokens.





Also I seriously want to put in a mobius and 2 umiirukas which will turn hydrogeddon into a 2100atk beast and mobius into some 2900atk beast. But why do yugioh pros never put in field cards?Rate and Fix this yugioh hand control deck please?
probably the problem with this is a burn deck like my volcanic deck which can be aggresive or burn but it seems like it would work well and catch your opponent off gaurd add the mobius maybe a pair and most people dont use field cards unless they affect the whole deck like rainbowruins and legendary ocean because its sort of a waste of deck space but the umirukas would probably do good because if they dont attack you you can attack them


best answer if u dont care ^.^Rate and Fix this yugioh hand control deck please?
u say its a hand control deck but i dont see much hand control. what exactly were u going for?