Yugioh, Rate my Hand Control?

Monsters:


Don Zaloog x3


Mystic Tomato x3


Exiled Force x3


Marauding Captain x3


Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch x2


Apprentice Magician x2


Old Vindictive Magician x2


Sangan x1


Crystal Seer x1


Spirit Reaper x1








Spells:


Messenger of Peace x3


Rota x3


Book of Moon x2


Monster Reborn x1


Lightning Vortex x1


Heavy Storm x1





Traps:


Drastic Drop Off x3


Drop Off x3


Dust Tornado x2


Torrential Tribute x1


(Radiant) Mirror Force x1 (Can't Afford actual MF, original copy stolen)





This deck has won a hobby league, vs Prisma GB's and Stunner City





Failed Techs:


Marshmallon


Rush Recklessly


Strike Slash(trap version of RR that pierces)


Warrior Returning Alive


Crush Card Virus





Side Deck:


Bottomless Trap Hole x3


Sakuretsu Armour x3


Compulsary Evacuation Unit x3


Rush Recklessly x2(Rarely Usefull)


Strike Slash x1(See ^^)


Threatening Roar x3Yugioh, Rate my Hand Control?
It looks like a great deck. The only thing I can see is to add some cards that'll boost attack and/or do piercing damage. I mean you have 3 Don Zaloog and it could be a little hard to activate its effect with such a low attack. You could use Big Bang Shot or even 2 Mage Power. I know alot of people don't like Equip Spells with so many ways to destroy them, but I think they are warranted in this deck. Another thing you really need to do is put Crush Card back in your Main Deck as it is way too good of a card to not have it in there. Even if you consider it a failed tech, it still needs to be in there. You have so many targets to use for its activation that it will rarely be a dead draw. You have to know when to use it and when to Side Deck it for something better. If you see you are playing against GB's or Gadgets, then you side it out as they don't have many monsters with 1500 Atk. If you are playing against Tele-DAD or Lightsworn or Zombie's, then it's a better play as the majority of their monsters have a high attack.Yugioh, Rate my Hand Control?
That's a nice deck, but be sure to always remember keeping the same deck the same way and dueling the same people will end in you defeat, change up your deck every now and then, and be sure not to base your deck around a certain card TRUST ME! bad experiences. Over all i say you have a pretty good idea of what your doing just remember my advice.
not bad .. nice firestorm monarch =D]


and add sakurestu armour its good (get 2)
not good, and if rush reklessly is rarely useful, take it out.
nice deck i like

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